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TBOS audition 1 by Tirrih TBOS audition 1 by Tirrih
Righto, let's see if I can do this. The start is pretty dull. Had some difficulty getting any kind of buildup because most of Fred's unlife can be summed up as: And then he picked some corn.

So, um, yeah, here's to hoping I can get in. Otherwise I'll just cheer for someone else X)

:icontbos-oct: :D

Next: [link]

And in the interest of covering my ass: There will be much cussing and probably some inappropriate jokes. Also, abusive dickery from farmer John.
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SkysongMA Jun 13, 2011  Student Writer
Oh, God. I should have waited until I was at home to read this. I don't think the librarians will take kindly to me trying not to laugh my ass off.

The whole thing is hilarious, but I think my favorite part is mentioning that the chickens were too fast. I don't know why.
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Tirrih Jun 19, 2011  Student General Artist
:D glad it could entertain.
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Not gonna lie, Tirrih... you're pretty darn amazing XD
I was so delighted to see an entry from you, and gosh, this was fun to read. Good luck getting in!
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Tirrih May 26, 2011  Student General Artist
Aww, thanks :blush:

Haha, that's really good to hear. I was sort of worried that I'd completely failed at humor this time XD

Good luck to you too
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One of the problems with telling stories is that you're so familiar with every joke and twist that by the time you get to them they will often seem wholly predictable or flat to you; luckily I've found that the audience, and even yourself, if you give yourself some time, won't have this problem.
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Tirrih Jun 5, 2011  Student General Artist
Hmm, yeah, I'll have to try that. :D
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DarthVengeance0325 May 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
<3 :heart: Good, old-fashioned black magic.

Of course. :D ^__^
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Tirrih May 18, 2011  Student General Artist
It's the best kind of magic :D
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